Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people think it is necessary, but others hold that it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
In past times, people from weaker sections had a notion that every wealthy person exploits them, which creates gap between both sections of the society. These days owners of giant companies earn more than a common worker do. Few persons believe that it is significant while other opposed them. This essay will further discuss my views on both aspects, this will lead to logical conclusion.
Commencing with, many people think it is unjustifiable to pay such a large amount of pay to directors. In their opinion, basic level job holder is contributing more in the growth of company as compared to top level workers. This situation demotivates the employees, add creates low work loyalty, therefore, it hampers the growth of organization. A survey was conducted by Employees Union of India found out that the staff members who were on the good pay scales giving their best to develop the business rather than the other ones.
However, these people don not understand that salary is not directly proportional to the amount of work done. Although the manager is not doing any physical work, does not mean he is not working. They handles the whole form, his team, all projects and many more. Moreover, hierarchical system motivates the employee to work harder for their promotions and get higher salaries. Thus, it is justifiable to pay high compensations to top executives.
To recapitulate, every employee is equally important for company, regardless of his position. In my opinion, salaries should be according to their levels but by keeping in mind to give enough money according to their work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'handle'
Suggestion: handle
..., does not mean he is not working. They handles the whole form, his team, all projects ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07196969697 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69596668019 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659090909091 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4211179463 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182601879604 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486253305719 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327688848329 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963298958235 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222136396951 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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