Discuss about whether the Internet is the best tool to find information? What do you think?
In this technological boom time, the Internet has become so ubiquitous that it has played an indispensable role in enabling us to access to the information. However, it is still a matter of debate whether the Internet is the best tool to get information or not.
It is undoubtedly true that the internet can facilitate our communication as it provides us with social networks like skype, facebook, twitter, to name but a few, which helps us get through to everyone. Furthermore, the Internet can help us ravel the unknown of everything on the grounds that it possesses a wealth of knowledge. Also, thanks to the Internet, we can get access to the information inexpensively and conveniently. According to a recent survey, a staggering number of students have gained ascendancy in their study by using the Internet. For Internet covers a wide variety of sources of information as well as multiple perspectives, students can easily absorb in an abundance of knowledge which helps them broaden their knowledge, thus making progress in their study.
On the other hand, to some extent, the Internet is not considered as the best tool to learn as it supplies people with a place where they are at liberty to post whatever they like, which degrades the preciseness of the information. Along with this, the users would easily be bewildered. Moreover, the sources of information are so huge that it could take you a lot of time to find what you want if you do not have great critical thinking skills.
For all intents and purposes, the Internet is either a boon or a bane. However, as far as I am concerned, the benefits that the Internet has brought us outweigh the drawbacks. I believe that the Internet would be an excellent means to get access to the information as long as we know how to use it properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77884615385 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93026381166 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9289473376 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27615797264 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898102342479 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089424117904 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166001127844 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732038625658 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.