Mobile phones and the Internet have made it easier to stay in contact with other people. However, as a lot of time is spent using telephones and computers, there is less face-to-face contact and direct communication.
Is the growing use of communications technology a positive or a negative development for society?
In this technological boom time, mobile phones and Internet have driven the main of our lives as well as communication. Along with that, the pervasion of mobile phones and Internet sparkled controversy among a lot of people whether it is positive or negative development.
There is no disputing the fact that communication technology has brought us an abundance of benefits. First and foremost, It has facilitated our communication process as people can keep in touch with each other regardless of long distance. In addition to that, Internet has made great contribution to helping others make friends. There is staggering figure of married couples meeting via Internet.
Furthermore, these modern equipments provide us a golden opportunity to get access to new things. Thanks to the invention of Internet, people can absorb in a myriad of information as well as get exposed to different perspectives, new ideas, not to mention but a few.
Hence, it cannot be denied some drawbacks that communication technology has brought to us. A lot of heavy phone users are found being prone to lacking interpersonal skills since they get so addicted to technology that rarely spare time to meet up others. Moreover, they are vulnerable to be invaded privacy or stolen identity via Internet.
For all intents and purposes, modern equipment has both advantages and disadvantages. However, it will be a card up in our sleeves if we know how to use it properly
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...leeves if we know how to use it properly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12658227848 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07179371195 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645569620253 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7330967264 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4615384615 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176188879217 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560772886723 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467663486837 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888730634056 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604019069685 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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