Nowadays, people are attracting more towards the foreign countries either to get job or for setting their life in a better way. As coin has two faces this also have some pros and cons.
There are some advantages of this. Firstly, living and working in a foreign country will increase ther knowledge about different cultures and languages. Usually, people migrate from one country to another for better source of income. For example, if a person is working in a foreign country there may be moreover chances for him to earn more money. Next, the lifestyle o people living in foreign countries are better than those living in some small city or countryside.
As going to foreign and setting there is in trend but this also have some disadvantages. People living i foreign countries usually try to settle there and never came back to their own country, this is a major drawback of this trend. Secondly, adjusting in a foreign country is not an easy task. This requires greater physical and mental strength. Also, people living in foreign countries forget the feeling of home as they become independent so, now they don't need anyone.
In my view, people can live and work in a foreign country but they shouldn't forget their own country.
- In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend? 61
- Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country 56
- Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults.Why is this?Is it positive/negative development?Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?------------------------------------------------ 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
...as they become independent so, now they dont need anyone. In my view, people can...
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Suggestion: shouldn't
... and work in a foreign country but they shouldnt forget their own country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85849056604 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43566197782 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575471698113 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1860454027 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2307692308 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355281037104 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136130916507 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855423916634 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228917524852 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983968518779 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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