Discuss the benefits and drawbacks of pet ownership for the animals and community
Moving towards the 21st century, many people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern about the role of the animals in our community. In fact, there are some who hold firmly to their belief that owning a pet brings a number of advantages for society. however, others argue convincingly that pets have impacts people in negative ways. Therefore, some arguments both for and against this issue will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are two main points for people to defend the former argument that the crucial role of animals in the modern world. It is a well-documented fact that the animals are usually well-treated by their owners. The most obvious example to prove is that they get food easily due to they do not have to hunt and scramble for food with other animals in the wildlife. Some pets are also cleaned-up regularly, some of them are gotten an extra treatment, such as medical check-up and grooming. Furthermore, there is no doubt that pets have an important role as a companion to their owner. For instance, in contemporary increasing elder people is a huge problem with society so animals become a good friend for them to share their feelings and pets trained to assist the blind and elderly to help with basic tasks such as crossing the street, answering the phone and collecting the mail.
On the other hand, there are two primary pieces of evidence for people to support the latter argument. First and foremost, it is commonly accepted that while playing with animals they may transfer the diseases for saliva and fur of these animals. Community life will be felt a threat from pets. A clear example to prove is that pets may catch communicable diseases to their owners. A recent survey shows that approximately 20 percentages of diseases are transmitted from pet animals to children in the USA. Equally important, there is no denying that owning a pet is a big responsibility. This is supported by the fact that movement space is limited so pets can feel illness as well in wildlife. It requires a lot of time spent, such as taking pets for regular walks to get exercise, making sure he gets fed on time, bathing him and playing with him.
All things considered, it is my strong belief that owning a pet has more advantages then we thought. Accordingly, I strongly recommend the governments should enhance people's awareness in terms of the vital role of the animals in our community. If this recommendation is carried out, the comprehensive development of our future generations will be ensured
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in fact, no doubt, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8623853211 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72015931267 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545871559633 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.668640842 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.952380952 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7619047619 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235474609369 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673047941128 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027720251282 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139548507762 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05259749565 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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