Discuss both sides of whether happiness is in having much money or in living with family and relatives far away from money's stress.
Since the inception of human being life, looking for happiness was the biggest concern in our life. However, people get confused between two main sources of happiness, either living the life in pursuit of money and wealth or living own life la dolce vita with friends, family, or otherwise, enjoying the moment. So, I will endeavor to set this suspenseful issue forth as simple as possible.
Admittedly,money concerns is foremost among the majority of people as a result of its increasingly importance in human life. Additionally, most people assure that if they managed to have multitude of money, they could get what they want when they want without facing any obstacles to their aspirations and desires. therefore, people do their utmost in pursuit of getting money as much as possiple in favour of honor, majesty and happiness as well. Further,the last global statistic points out that the vast majority of people throughout the world , considering their differences in culture and background, tend to increase the amount of money they have, even if they have a large wealth sufficient for their descendants. Ultimately, tending to have money is something inherent in the essence of human being as well as no rational person can deny this inextricable fact.
Despite all facts and evidences which have been mentioned above. Quite a few people contradict the idea of “money is life”,in all of its forms due to many reasons and facts such as the wisdom “ money is a facility not a goal” which means that people should consider money a tool to get their goal not a goal itself. In addition, the audience of this idea emphasize that depicting money as thing where the happiness is, needs reconsideration. A very logical explanation is that people seek to have much money planning to set their time aside for their own life for future. Thus,they would manage to spend time enjoying their life with companions and family. Meanwhile,they forget that they can enjoy life with a few bit money better, because money distract people from the real happiness, the more myriad the money, the greater the stress and pressure you have.eventually, happiness is concentrated on what you have not in what you want, therefore amuse your life blanking anything you hate out. Then you will figure out the real happiness. Taking into all proves and evidences above into account, it's obvious that the inextricable connection between money and happiness still baffle human’s mind. Howevere, almost everyone realize certainly that money is not the happiness after spending the whole life in pursuit of happiness on it. Hence, we ought to reconsider our perspective and attitude towards the real happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2284.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 443.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15575620767 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79431355718 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546275395034 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.008036297 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.888888889 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6111111111 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233430072529 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754308121619 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512008997255 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15609300117 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528426000837 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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