With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.
In today's modern society, most people would accept that the relationship between family members become less intimate than it accustomed to be the past. In this essay, I look at the cause of this problem and give some useful solutions for it
In my opinion, there are two main reasons why family members are not as close as they used to be in the past. First of all, different thoughts between young generation and older people triggers mat of contradictions in the family. The older generation especially parents, always consider their children like little kids and expect to bring all the best things for them. Therefore, parents force their children to follow their choices, their advice about another aspects such as lifestyle, subject which they need to study and job they must work in the future.. as all parents claim that they have more experiences than the children and they know what is best for kids. Unfortunately, children don't share the same thought with their parents. Children always hope to have an independent life, do the job they are interested in and they have a tendency not to listen their parents' choice when they grow up. That is the reason which lead to so many conflicts between young and old generation in their family.
Another point I would mention is that most of bad impacts of modern life make family members live far away from other people in their family. Although people always expect to have free time for their family, they must be hard-working in their career o support household finance every time. This gives rise to the lack of time to gather with other family members and all their children must grow up in a parentless environment. Also, the appearance pf many passive and solitary forms of modern entertainment such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter.. make people in addiction and are not fond of communicating with other people in their family
From the above mentioned problem, some suggestions have been put forward to deal with the situation. Firstly, I strongly believe that all family members, especially young generation and older people need to sympathize with the different though of each people. Each family should spend at least one day a week to share about their life, their thought and emotion. Family members become more and more understanding each other after this time and recognize some good solutions for the problems in the family. Also, governments need to have some reasonable policy to offer financial incentives to parents who choose to remain at home
In conclusion, although the problems of the shortage of understand between family members may seem difficult to elimate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to weaken bad impacts of this problem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, therefore, at least, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2276.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 457.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98030634573 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52325394495 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487964989059 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5274876881 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.444444444 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3888888889 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225129110292 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770814972515 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780876463101 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157278064194 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644021332321 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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