With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be.
It is known already that the rates of marriage annulment and family separation is increased and it comes to conclusion that families nowadays are not as intimate as before. This essay will discuss about reasons why this happened and offer some solutions.
There are some factors why family is falling apart. First, lack of communication especially between husband and wife. It happened when both are too busy, focus with their own carrier and/or problems, so they will have limited time even just for short conversation with the spouse or their children. Family is about sharing, whether it is happiness or burden so it will be really hard to keep the marriage work or family in harmony with all the problems that occurred with no communication at all.
In addition, people nowadays are seems really attached to their smartphone even when it is supposed to be family time. So instead of sharing with family, they share the problems in social media. Husband has no clues of what happened to his wife, parents do not know about their children problem and children do not trust their parents. Some couples may manage to maintain their marriage but it still affected their relationship somehow, especially with children. They will grow apart. Furthermore, another problem such as cheating and arguing will arise and will lead to family legal separation.
As solution to strengthen family/marriage bond is communication. Family can force to have it, for example by making “no smartphone in dining and living room” rule. My family has been doing it since last year. So every night, instead of have eyes glued on smartphone, we do small chit-chat time after dinner while watching TV and it really works to make family close each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d will lead to family legal separation. As solution to strengthen family/marriage ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, still, then, while, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03460207612 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60421946623 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595155709343 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6998549321 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236432028342 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812509639903 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598438673874 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150784486776 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254846425631 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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