With divorce rate and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be.
Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.
In this modern era, the relationships between people have become more mechanical and a point is argued that with the increase of divorce rate and family breakdowns,the families today are not so close as they used to be.in my view, i feel that because of the various factors the present generation do not have much attachment to the people and their feelings as it was in the past.
Ironically, people nowadays have become more selfish and began to be in their own world.they feel that social media is very much important and spend most of the time being active on social media. All the people started to lead their own personal life and even do not want their better-half to involve in their personal matters.families now are lacking to spend some quality time with their family members.So, I feel that advancements in the technology is the first and foremost reason for this.
On the other side of the spectrum, In olden days when ever people get time after their work they try spending their time with their relatives, children and discuss about what is going on in their life and how all the things are. this helped them in knowing about the things and respecting and valuing people's decisions and their opinions.
Agglomerating all the points, I conclude saying that with the development in the new technologie sand changes occuring in the society the mentality of the people is being changed and the divorce rate is being increased which indeed effecting on the relationships of the family members.And I feel that people in the past had more love and affectiob towards their family when compared to today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, i feel, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85920577617 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62277784519 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530685920578 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.243381128 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.333333333 106.682146367 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.1666666667 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208750265299 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110653787071 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781117083502 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146753286334 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730715861127 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 13.0946893788 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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