In this day and age, it is a hot potato that classmates play a more integral part in a child's success than his parents do. In my experience, I completely agree with that statement on account of the role of friends as partners and motivators as well.
First and foremost, it is undeniable that children being at the same age have the similar problems in terms of both mental and physical health. Therefore, they find it easier to confide in their peers about intimate problems, particularly in the adolescent age. They can also put themselves in the shoes and work out together to find the most plausible solution. Although it is a phase that every teenagers must have gone through, it will be comfortable to acquaint with someone who are willing to lend a sympathetic ear to listen to their secrets. Moreover, children have a tendency to imitate their friends due to great deal of time spending at school; thus, good compadre will lay the foundations for good dignity, which devotes to future citizens.
The second merit is inspiring others to change for the better and drive to succeed. Owing to the fact that no one wants to be looked down on since they have just gotten bad mark, there is no doubt that they will set their hearts on getting superior ones. Consequently, it creates competitive studying environment, which everyone are trying to keep up with their peers. Having the aim in common, they will motivate mutually and assist each other in achieving their goals. By virtue of this, not only do they push on the process of studying, they also create lasting relationships.
In conclusion, even though both classmates and parents have crucial influence on the success of a child, he is said to received the more significant contribution from his friends due to the compassionateness and inspiring-takers.
- Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion 11
- Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion 11
- Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree with this statement Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay 84
- Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional past times than spending all day indoors Do you agree or disagree with the statement Wr 89
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86451612903 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82646921083 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622580645161 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8208045438 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124515050106 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442621139136 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681700041627 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109070533097 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957044827943 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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