Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A zoo has no useful purpose.
• Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
The question of holding animals in captivity has always aroused heated debates. While some people sticking to the idea that zoos bare a didactic and educational function, there are plenty of proponents who believe that zoos have not an important purpose in the modern world to cruelly hold animals aside their natural zone of inhabitance. Despite of sharing an idea of animal welfare with the rising possibilities for their comfort living I agree on the crucial role of zoos for the animals as well as for people.
First of all, I would like to draw ones attention to such purpose of zoos as a vital refuge for threatened and endangered animals, which spices are about to disappear with the Amur tiger as an example. Along with it, the zoo can be considered as a place to cure sick or injured animals, which otherwise will not survive in the wild living. This option demands not only ample financing but also a constant control which is hardly conceivable without a zoo foundation.
Secondly, based on the zoos creation the major world organizations can provide better support and direct help to the threatened spices. Along with the large foundations and scientific institutes, some zoos can be the base for the research. For instance, a large corporation like Samsung can establish a fund to finance the dying breed of white rhinoceros. Although one can argue on other possibilities to rise population of rare animals like sanctuaries, natural parks and reserves, I consider the zoo as an example of that possibility.
To conclude I can say, that despite of sharp disputes around the cruelty to animals we cannot ignore the crucial role of the zoos in preserving endangered breeds and scientific researches in support. With the technology development, people should come to the better treatment of animals, so that their inhabitance area can be specially tailored for the animal needs in zoos or other captivity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...le. First of all, I would like to draw ones attention to such purpose of zoos as a ...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'zoos'' or 'zoo's'?
Suggestion: zoos'; zoo's
...oo foundation. Secondly, based on the zoos creation the major world organizations ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, for instance, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77026623269 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8216709623 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095993755428 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389638570367 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0216040197862 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623636325085 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00733889357804 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.