Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With intelligency of the kids, undersatanding of the money management has a significant role during growing phase of children. Today, without money, it is impossible to survive in contemporary world. Hence, individuals must give the advice to off-spring about saving money. Here, I firmly believe that adults should give the proper suggestion and help to child about manage their own money. This essay would discuss advantages of it and also, describes my perception.
There are several manifold points that shore up my point of view. First and foremost, at the early age children often comply to their guardians so, they learn properly. Because after the flourished age often children insist to their parents, they think their parents have personal intention in their moeny. Also, today it is essential to have knowledge about banks and investing money in proper place. if off-spring learn at intially then it would be benifited by themselves, owing to they have ability to deposit their money on bank and they will get the interest of each penny.
Moving further, childrens often instigate towards attractive advertise and they buy all things without any requirement of it and as a consequence, they spend more money than that require. Therefore, it is paramount that off-spring has ability to think whether particular thing would be usabled in future or not. Moreover, child learnt manage money in childhood then, they will not messed with any fraudent company. For example, today people disubursed their money on suspicious company and as a result, they loses their money. On heels of these evidences we strongly believe that juvenil has require knowledge about financial things.
To conclude, organize financials thing by self, without any help of individuals is important in 21st century because no one is true honest to believe. Also, for auspious future of kids; we must gave proper lesson about financial responsibility at early age. Indisputably, we can say that children must learn about managing money at young age with help of their peers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ks and investing money in proper place. if off-spring learn at intially then it wo...
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Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to manage'
Suggestion: to manage
...n future or not. Moreover, child learnt manage money in childhood then, they will not ...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'mess'
Suggestion: mess
... money in childhood then, they will not messed with any fraudent company. For example,...
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Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...uspicious company and as a result, they loses their money. On heels of these evidence...
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Line 5, column 593, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...es we strongly believe that juvenil has require knowledge about financial things. To...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22960725076 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67562872169 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580060422961 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8885135114 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223520120876 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740589834342 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653220566792 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146421289302 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338380171707 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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