Nowadays people indeed want to keep their privacy from others, according to my opinion travelling by Car Comprises both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, there are several potential benefits of travelling by car. Firstly, these days everyone wants privacy from other people because it protects them physically as well as people can keep their thoughts and ideas safe that helps them to live with safety in the Society. Therefore, people can keep their privacy using a car as a private vehicle and they do not need to share their information with others. Secondly, using a car is much more convenient as Compared to transit and subway aa people have a busy schedule now so they need to travel daily from home to work. That is why the car is the best mode of transportation instead of waiting a long for public transportation. Finally, having a car indicates the social status of people which helps in getting respect from others. it does not reflect our social status but also provides Independence and mobility. Most importantly, it provides convenience either on trips or in medical emergencies.
On the other hand, along with some benefits, numerous drawbacks are attached to the trend of travelling by car. First of all, if everyone prefers using Car then it would become difficult for people to manage their Expenditure as people have to spend a lot of money to buy a car and after that, they have to bear oil and repair and maintenance expenses. Additionally, more vehicles mean heavy traffic on roads that leads to accidents which are quite bad for society. What is more, pollution is a big concern for the entire world at present as everyone has a car these days that pollutes the environment that neither good for the human nor the ecosystem. Last but not least, despite having a car, people prefer to buy other models of cars which enhance traffic.
To conclude, although travelling by car has some demerits yet it provides many benefits to the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as well as, first of all, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87278106509 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67137482935 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9133480176 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.8 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17350099728 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676319519884 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518222336362 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123746717068 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134891468815 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.