Do you think it is better to send criminals to jail or let them receive education or job training?
People have different views about whether or not criminals should be punished by being put into prison. In my opinion, prison is the only answer in a few situations, but in most cases, education, vocational training, and rehabilitation are better.
Prison is the only answer in case of criminals who are a risk to the society, such as murderers since they cannot be made to mix with society. In the majority of cases, it is more disadvantageous when offenders are forced to go to jail. Offenders learn a lot about crime in traditional prisons and when they leave prison they tend to escalate their crime seriousness. In other words, prisons act as universities of crime, which prevent them from being a good citizen. Furthermore, the cost of running and managing prisons is often costly. Without prisons, the government would spend that money on other important matters such as education and healthcare which would ease some burden from the government’s shoulders.
On the other hand, I believe education and job training are the best methods that can be used to help criminals become better citizens. First, education contributes greatly to heighten people’s intellect and to form a civilized society. Therefore, they have the second chance to recognize and reflect on their guilt, which leads them to re-integrate in the community. Secondly, the most effective way to keep people out of prison once they leave is to give them jobs skills that make them marketable employees. By providing job training, the criminals would no longer have ideas of committing crimes.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that we should hate the crime and not the criminal. To fight crime we should focus on the causes of crime. Education and job training help to rehabilitate criminals. So, people who commit less serious crimes should not be sent to prison. The focus should be on reforming them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
People have different views about whether or not criminals should be punished by being p...
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Suggestion:
...aining, and rehabilitation are better. Prison is the only answer in case of cri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in most cases, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06709265176 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84915964881 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562300319489 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9982064964 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1111111111 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158018742675 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055113678586 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624363241038 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985353568563 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673816386038 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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