Nowadays , many students are likely to find a part - time job to have a salary or learning some experiece in the life . They want to be an independent person , but it has both drawbacks and advantages . Personally , it is not beneficial for students to work before university study.
To begin with , students who go to work before university study can waste their time . It delay students to graduate university and receive a certificate . There are many things in the whole life that students cannot manage all of that . They should make a clearly decision : study or work . As i know , my brother who have just graduated university worked before he had studied , he said me that he was under pressure of work , he could not put up with it . And he regretted to go to work before university study .
On the other hand , it can be clearly seen that study is the shortest way to be successful . Knowledge is very important. The more you study harder , the brighter future you will have . Moreover, study is everyone's duty in the world . If you do not have knowledge , you are nothing . Students who have a degree of university can easily to find a well - paid job . To be specific , most people in Vietnam have a find job or success after they had graduated university . So that , study is very significant .
In my conclusion , students who work before university is not good for them . i believe that students should put their learning first .
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kindom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
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- Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study Why Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice 58
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, well, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63599977229 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8321341885 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.3157894737 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1578947368 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57894736842 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305267043407 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105012868116 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784905111511 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191973257681 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440460322632 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.86 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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