20 years ago my father graduated. When he was studying, there was not cutting edge devices such as computers, smart phone so he must have used books for his studying and doing his exercise, he said he had gone to library for borrowing the books needed them that's why it was so time consuming but nowadays technology has advanced . On the one hand it has helped students access to information far quicker and more convenient than the past on the other hand with emerging technology they gain a wide varieties of information.
Basically internet and computers cause students to obtain data sources in the blink of an eye because they do not need to go to library or book store and they study books and articles by just soe clicks and it is really faster . as an example when I studied for master's degree , I worked on a research project , I collected information through internet , in addition to studying plenty of articles, if I did not have internet , I should waste a lot of time for finding books.
Last but not least internet is a way to achieve a load of information in every fields , since typing some key words in Google as a search engine gives you various kinds of data sources.
Eventually as far as I'm concerned introduction of modern technology has caused a big change in researching process. It not only has become so faster but also you have access different kinds of information. Everybody should support the improvement of technology and I hope technology would replace books or written word.
- Do you think that modern technology, such as the internet and computers will ever replace the book or the written word as the main source of information?Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience. 61
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70833333333 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68991794593 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.9084352537 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.111111111 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188212169848 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648069825194 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042433764637 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105487571781 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201339536042 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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