Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
The world of sport is a multimillion dollar globe. Some people flock that why sportspeople receive huge salaries whereas some professionals like doctors, lawyers, teachers and social workers earn less money rather than sports players. There is some debate whether sports professionals should receive a great deal more money or not.
On the one hand, only a few people are talented and will obtain public popularity. Sports professionals train vigorously from an early age to become peak performers in their field. They face pressure either from the media or in the match, competition as well as there is little privacy out of spotlight and bring their achievements not only for themselves but also for schools, teams and countries. . Salaries of Sportspeople are not determined regarding to their contribution in the society or responsibilities are given to them. They are well known just like other celebrities so they can earn more money in compared with professionals like the top surgeons or scientists.
On the other hand, professionals like doctors, teachers, lawyers and social workers aren’t paid high salaries as same as athletes. Doctors spend time on the grueling study and internship and their works are saving people's lives. Teachers educate and inspire youngesters to be responsible citizens for tomorrow also social workers rescue people facing physical, mental and psychology challenges.
My personally view is that sports players cannot earn huge salaries and it's not fair. We need to eliminate disparity in income received by professionals and reconsider our social priorities. In addition to creating conditions that people feel valued, appreciate their vocation and specialization.
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- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, so, well, whereas, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51330798479 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01225687153 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0260955463 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.571428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218145832574 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704920600747 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595928436894 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131635945788 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609410002127 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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