Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can be better for their overall skills development and creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree?
In recent years, a school of thought holds the idea that children participate in fun activities instead of reading books , which can be better for their overall skills development and creativity. I agree wholeheartedly with the idea
To begin with, some of the reasons why children should do an enjoyable activity instead of reading is that would let children be more comfortable when they learn about what they exactly like. Another reason is that fun activities are not stressful but instead children will become interested and like to learn more. For example, when children do physical activities in teamwork, that would help their communication skills.
On the one hand, if children just read books or learn plenty of theory and don’t do outside activities, they would not have enough health to develop comprehensively. This is one of the striking reasons that I want to explain, so that parents should spend time with them to do outdoor activities, namely go to the zoo, go to the nation forest, which make their life more colorful
In conclusion , I believe that children really need a real experience through outdoor activities, which gives them plenty of knowledge that books do not. We need to combine theory and practice, so that would help children develop holistically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12796208531 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77392092667 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582938388626 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.4935865904 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.571428571 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1428571429 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28345175402 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132797358272 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088550462611 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17122811797 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894189277873 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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