It is undoubtedly that doing volunteer work is unseparated activity among students. Nevertheless, some people think that students should not be encouraged to get involved in volunteering because it such waste a time. I strongly disagree with the idea that volunteering is useless activity because it will give more benefits both for students and for the society.
To commence with, volunteer work will give students a lot of experience that can boost their emotional and cognitive skills such as public speaking, building any networking, team working, and problem solving. As we know, students will be asked to join and apply their knowledge in community whether individually or in a group so that they will be pushed to solve any problems in community and communicate their idea to the public. Additionally, during voluntary work, they will meet a lot of related parties in solving the problem such as the local government, private parties, or other social organization that will be beneficial for their future career development.
Furthermore, conducting voluntary work will also provide a lot of advantages for the community it self because the inhabitants will be helped to solve their problem through students academic knowledge. For instance, in a small village in Indonesia, students from the Faculty of Agriculture University of Indonesia gave sophisticated hydraulic pump that help villagers to get water during drought. Moreover, the community also have an opportunity to learn something new from students during their volunteering work. For example, the community service conducted by the students from Faculty of Pharmacy in Surabaya was purposed to educate public about antibiotic use which was very beneficial to increase the public awareness in rational medication use. Hence, they can apply their new knowledge to their daily life so that their health status will be improved too.
In summary, I strongly disagree that voluntary work is considered as useless activity because it is not only can make students learn cognitive and emotional skills but also the community can learn and be helped to solve their problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...e a lot of advantages for the community it self because the inhabitants will be helped ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37797619048 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89788504619 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508928571429 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1718257685 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.583333333 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219428769542 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998909257691 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735553706505 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162630429405 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116811888084 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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