Drug abuse among teenagers is becoming a problem in our society. What are the causes of this and what are some solutions?
It is true that drug abuse among adolescents is becoming increasingly serious in my parts of the world. This worrying trend can be ascribed to a number of reasons, and it can have some adverse impacts on society and young individuals.
There are several factors that contribute to the consumption of harmful substances. Perhaps the primary reason why drugs find their way into the lives of young people is the lack of proper family guidance. Teenagers who do not have a close parental relationship or receive little supervision are at higher risk for addiction. As children are left unattended and any confusion that they may experience is not handled with the deserved dedication, many turn to drugs to hide from their problems and escape their reality. Another cause of this issue is peer pressure, which is especially influential during adolescence. For example, in order to impress their friends, many teenagers choose to engage in risky behaviors, such as red light running or substance abuse, without taking into consideration their harmful effects.
Increased consumption of drugs certainly results in several detrimental impacts on children. A major problem is the tendency of drug abusers to show anti-social behavior. Research shows a strong relationship between drug use and juvenile delinquency, with youngsters committing crimes such as theft or robbery to fuel their drug use. Use of drugs can also lead to emotional problems, such as anxiety, depression, and suicidal thoughts, experienced by many youngsters. In addition, it has been found that those who are addicted to harmful substances can have serious and irreversible brain damage, leading to poor academic performance and memory problems. This hinders students’ personal and professional development and prevents them from becoming productive members of society in the future.
In conclusion, the increased use of drugs among adolescents is caused by several social factors including parental supervision and peer influence, and this phenomenon may bring about serious mental and physical impacts on children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 446, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun turn seems to be countable; consider using: 'many turns'.
Suggestion: many turns
...t handled with the deserved dedication, many turn to drugs to hide from their problems an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47987616099 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9673658828 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606811145511 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.507508538 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189209202988 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062149854545 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489023630835 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120796813732 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279771225994 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.