With the effect of globalization economies and business trends in many countries have changed dramatically. Shopping malls or one stop shop concept is a good example for one such development. Now, more and more of these types of shops have become popular and every junction of cities or villages has one or more of them. Most of the customers also get attracted to them saying that those places are more convenient places to buy things and able to save time. However, local vendors have become so disappointed about the development. They are afraid of disappearing their businesses and local manufacturers, as they cannot compete with the huge investment done by large businesses. In my opinion, large scale businesses are serious threat to the small scale local traders, unless they change their business strategies.
Firstly, supermarkets are in a position to offer many varieties of products. They sale from a thing of a safety pin to, day to day commodities to, office furniture and electrical appliances and many more. If, a person goes to a supermarket of Arpico or Keels, he can buy food that he needs to have a party tonight and his favorite fragrance from same shop without wasting time. On the other hand, local traders cannot give that much of variety for their customers and sell limited number of products from few manufacturers. However, as customers want to buy all they want from one shop, local businesses at serious threat to attracting persons.
Secondly, shopping malls have integrated the technology to upgrade their businesses. Shoppers can use electronic weighing scales to weigh the vegetables or fruits. They can use credit cards to settle bills. Further, many business report have shown that on line business facilities have dramatically increased their sales. Nowadays, more and more people are interest in such reliable and safe transactions instead carrying money in their purses to settle transactions. Nevertheless, most local vendors so far unable to incorporated such technology to boost their businesses. Open market vegetable vendor or a grocery owner may far more behind such developments.
In conclusion, globalization has opened the gates of country’s economy and brought many quality and better services, as well as many disadvantages. Local businesses and manufacturers are under severe threat in continuing their businesses. Local traders must change with the technology to compete with multinational players.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...les. Nowadays, more and more people are interest in such reliable and safe transactions ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34190231362 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97487179782 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550128534704 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2063658304 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4545454545 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6818181818 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40909090909 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174877013725 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558267775127 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532487614061 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117616461765 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286775619208 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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