Due to increasing world demands for oil and gas energy, people need to look for new sources of energy in remote and untouched natural places. Do advantages of locating these sources outweigh disadvantages damaging such places?
It is true that the demands for energy are becoming greater than ever and people are advisable to find out new sources of oil and natural gas in distant and isolated regions. However, I stand with point that the drawbacks outweigh the benefits.
On the one hand, there are compelling reasons why discovering of oil and gas reserves in faraway places is beneficial. Placing more power stations in remote and untouched region would create a great number of jobs for the inhabitants here. Like industrial zones, these power plant require a huge quantity of worker and employers to make them perform well and operate properly. Moreover, having a stable stream of energy could balance the price of petroleum. It is obvious that the shortage of oil will not only lead to a rise in fuel price but also inscrease the cost of other goods and services.
On the other hand, energy exploration and production activities might lead to many serious consequences. The primary reason is that extensive exploitation could put the environment in such places in jeopardy by harming its biodiversity and natural habitats. For example, oil extraction companies frequently disposed of drilling waste into oceans and their transportation activities carry a huge risk of oil leaks and oil spills, which not only kill marine organisms but also poison the food chains of many species living around oil rigs. Furthermore, although the government poures money into oil exploration in faraway provinces, there is no apparent evidence that their exploration efforts will paid off. This amount of money should be better spent on renewable energy sources to serve the growing needs of global use and avoid posing a threat to the environment.
In conclusion, although the advantages of discovering and exploiting new sources of energy are undeniable, I do not believe that we should damage remote and untouched places for energy due to its environmentally unsustainable and potential risks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 697, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'pay'
Suggestion: pay
...nce that their exploration efforts will paid off. This amount of money should be bet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17295597484 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8251194994 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2854370829 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.538461538 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331075491094 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936108964686 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937808485949 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209964348177 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814274082585 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.