At the out set of new millennium, oil and gas energy is maiden requirement of everyone not only for using purpose but also earning money. Nowadays oil nad fossil fuel demand is increasing by people want to look for new source of energy in rural and untouched natural place. Benefical are overpower on detiremental one my complete point of view will be articulted in upcoming paragraph before reaching to conclusion.
It nothwarthy mention that, introducing new industries of fossile fuel will help remote area to become development area. For instance:- employment rate will be increase in rural area due to people are able to get more job opporunities with the introduction of new companies owing to this increase 80 per cent employment in secandary sector. Due to in remote area people are only engaged with primary sector income this is only one way for them to earn money but with the help of industries they can get another way to earn income. Hence, it is enough to prove that why this is positive development for untouched area.
In addition to, with the development of oil and gas energy people will get more and more facilities like, free fossile fuel and decline in elecricity charge. For example:- in UP people have no charges on gas energy due to development of industries in their area. Owing to government foucing on their fertilizties more because they are helping government by developing this type of insdustries in their area. Therefore, it is clear that oil imdustries are important in remote area.
To sum up, after analization the advantages of oil companies in untouched area from my mind, authorities must also introduce more scheme to rural area growth . So, citizen can get option for develop their area.
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- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your opinion 61
- Due to increasing world demands for oil and gas energy people need to look for new sources of energy in remote and untouched natural places Do advantages of locating these sources outweigh disadvantages damaging such places 73
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- Some believe that pupils should be given less homework others say the opposite What is your opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92808219178 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75662721124 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52397260274 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.606232483 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262388442484 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108322140811 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115101583431 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171796011896 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100189030118 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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