The escalating rate of offense has become a grievous issue owing to the proliferation in an influx of criminal activities such as killing, stealing, robbing, kidnapping, and so on; thus, these criminal activities are vigorously considered to be a big menace for the mankind. Further, the divergent causes of crime, as well as measures, are yet to be interpreted in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are certain causes that need to be considered, which seem to be responsible for the rise of crime in this present scenario. The first and foremost is overpopulation because due to this unemployment and poverty deject the youth, and therefore, they turn to be criminals. Moreover, Politics also seems to have a major role in the escalation of crime as many political coalitions have their own mafias which they use to subjugate the people; hence, the misuse of political power constrains the victims to be criminals.
The implementation of some appropriate methods is likely to give fruitful results to mitigate this issue. Firstly, the expansion of the population is a must to control, It is evident that people can get proper employment, thereby controlling the population. Secondly, the politicians have to live up to their responsibilities in terms of understanding the sorrows of victims, whereby they can get proper justice and become a good citizen.
In conclusion, though solving the problem of crime is an arduous task. Having said that it is easy for the government to solve with the usage of having legal power and some other alternatives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 416, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...itions have their own mafias which they use to subjugate the people; hence, the mis...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...y, the expansion of the population is a must to control, It is evident that people can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14229249012 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09617133405 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592885375494 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.178401441 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.1 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202069596243 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07597548018 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740041223278 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106382130714 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772504367707 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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