Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and What could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
Increased crime commissions have been highlighted as an emerging issues, capturing significant public attention due to the negative implications on social cohesion. However, Identifying the causes could the key to finding the solutions.
There are many reasons behind the increase in crime rate. Firstly, the inadequate parental supervision is the result of concentration on their career pursuit, which leads to children’s being trapped in the social diseases, such as, being a robber or a murder. Specifically, without the parent’s shelter, their child will be easily enticed into illegal acts by negative pressure peers and gradually step into the crimes live without notice, increasing higher rate of criminality. Second, the rise in the number of criminals could be explained by the negative impacts of social media .There are posts and films containing violent actions appearing in every corner of the people life, especially, children, those evil scenes have turned children from the pure mind to violent one, which could make them crave for fights in real life, increasing the rate of crimes.
Nonetheless, these problems could be addressed by many solutions. Firstly, parents are recommended to reduce their workload and spend more time in nurturing their children’s life. For example, parents could utilize their free time to convey the knowledge that related to the value of life to their kids, which could make them become a good citizen in the future. Moreover, the posts and films that contains violent acts on mainstream media should be restricted from children by parents. Instead of constantly exposing them to aggressive films, parents are encouraged to take their kids for sport activities, which would enable them to become healthier and avoid the negative social impacts.
In conclusion, increased crime rate could be attributed to inadequate parental observation and violent materials on social media. However, thanks to workload reduction and the restriction of negative materials, the problem could easily be addressed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5619047619 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85333079026 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.6370009565 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.769230769 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16688992986 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723940873814 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503975229356 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118775175362 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479965243795 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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