It is true that anti-social activities are showing a consistent surge with each passing year. There are many reasons which are to be held responsible for these growing trends. In addition to this, some possible solutions will also be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are various reasons which results in rising criminal activities. The very first cause is grinding poverty which is one of the major issues in some parts of the world. As a result of this, folks find it difficult to make their both ends meet, and hence they turns to crimes. Second most obvious reason is the influence from outside the world of entertainment and technology. It involves such a content in movies, songs or even simply being online on social media sites, which tends to be an influencer on people. Therfore, if shows violent or criminal material, it can encourage more and more delinquent acts in the real world.
Crimes can, of course be dealt with tougher criminal laws which have sharp teeth to bite and by heightening the social awareness. Explaining it further, the most efficient way to plum these activities is to legislate new laws by government authorities, which should be harsher. As a result, it would deter those subjects performing such acts. Moreover, by running campaigns to spread awareness would lead to a non-violent and non-criminal society. There are also scientific proves as well where making public aware by familiarizing to the consequences leads to manipulation of thoughts and they are more likely to shun it.
In conclusion, there are a multitude of reasons for increasing antisocial activities nowadays, and steps are needed to be taken to address the issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, of course, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07913669065 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8013616215 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625899280576 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8886823619 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171934984114 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508046725089 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387364737039 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101066656005 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164932083968 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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