In this era of modernization, crime is swelling at an alarming rate. It is the mother of all pathetic problems.
There are numerous causes of increasing crime rate. First and foremost, poverty is the major reason of this problem. Cime is also created by an unemployment. For example, people's earning money is snached by criminals. Thereafter, they do not want to do work. Moreover, Whose can not get most of the basic opportunities due to lack of money. Those people create crime. Furthermore, crime is also borned by broken families due to discrimination among family members.
"Ignorance is not the only option against prevention".
There are phenominal solutions to reduce the crime. Initially, the government should charge the heavy fine on criminals. If, criminals again commit crime. Thereafter, the law should give the capital punishment to criminals. The government should provide an equal amenities to every youngster. Therefore, crime can be reduced.
In the epilogue, crime is a common problem for countries like india. It is the matter of grave concern.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...uld charge the heavy fine on criminals. If, criminals again commit crime. Thereaft...
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Line 6, column 263, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'amenity'?
Suggestion: amenity
... The government should provide an equal amenities to every youngster. Therefore, crime ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35087719298 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12659384477 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654970760234 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 20.2975951904 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.2419868189 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 48.1578947368 106.682146367 45% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.0 20.7667163134 43% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220820303209 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663564310607 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790853539123 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104210282921 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416942367573 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.88 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.1190380762 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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