As early as the 10th century, the newly invented first steam engine was a production by Thomas Newcomen in London. It contributed a considerable benefit to the outbreak of the first industrial revolution. The working regulation of the Newcomen machine is not complex. A power arises from the reciprocating motion of the piston transmitted to the pump through a balanced level. Therefore, the pump can suck water continuously. Besides, the steam engine was used in all sorts of applications including factories, mines, locomotives, and steamboats. It held a unique position for three-quarters of a century until John Smeaton, and James Watt gradually improved the steam engine. It was a background of the first team railway.
In 1804, the British architect Terry created the first steam engine-powered train operated by fuel or coal. It was not until 1814, with Stephenson's creation of the invention of Terry, that he applied this machine practical marking the birth of the world's first practical steam railway.
The invention of the steam engine created a range of advanced machines used to transport goods without human or animal power. It made a historic step in industrial development in the world.
As early as the 10th century, the newly invented first steam engine was a production by Thomas Newcomen in London. It contributed a considerable benefit to the outbreak of the first industrial revolution. The working regulation of the Newcomen machine is not complex. A power arises from the reciprocating motion of the piston transmitted to the pump through a balanced level. Therefore, the pump can suck water continuously. Besides, the steam engine was used in all sorts of applications including factories, mines, locomotives, and steamboats. It held a unique position for three-quarters of a century until John Smeaton, and James Watt gradually improved the steam engine. It was a background of the first team railway.
In 1804, the British architect Terry created the first steam engine-powered train operated by fuel or coal. It was not until 1814, with Stephenson's creation of the invention of Terry, that he applied this machine practical marking the birth of the world's first practical steam railway.
The invention of the steam engine created a range of advanced machines used to transport goods without human or animal power. It made a historic step in industrial development in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... background of the first team railway. In 1804, the British architect Terry cre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26943005181 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01710160441 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60103626943 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2446864219 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.75 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491254651198 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164070618803 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170303203258 0.0667982634062 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273525172536 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175792175306 0.056905535591 309% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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