With easier access to the Internet, many students are turning to online sources to study instead of library. What are the problems derived from this? Suggest some solutions.
because of technological advancements, the majority of students prefer to study online to learn in a library. this is due to the fact that online learning is very convenient. Nevertheless, people can face some negative effects from this tendency. The problems of this trend will be examined in this essay, along with possible practical solutions to such a solution.
The main problem is that arises from the online study is the possibility that students are easily distracted. For example, the Internet has many temptations that makes pupils prefer focusing on this to studying online such as games, films, social networking sites, and so on. As a result, their attention span will be shortened, resulting in poor academic performance. Another problem is that the unemployment rate is soaring. this is because librarians’ roles are no longer needed if no one visits the library. As a result, not only librarians but also those working in libraries will be subject to the loss of their only livelihood, thus being unable to financially support themselves and their families.
Since such issues are serious, the government and individuals should take steps immediately to address these problems. The first solution would be to apply a delivery system for libraries. For instance, the management of the library can build a website for online borrowing, which will enable young people to get information from the store. A second measure would be to launch some campaigns for children to participate in reading books in the library. As a result, this ought to arouse an interest in reading physical books among the younger generations.
In conclusion, there are various negative consequences of turning to online sources to study instead of libraries and appropriate steps need to be taken to tackle these problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23287671233 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88980224714 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9497731533 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278482894233 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841641338129 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666446992975 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171222621885 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606696542415 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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