Education used to be a short period of training, but today, people treat it like a lifelong practice. Do you agree or disagree?
Education is a big concern for many people, so there are many ideas about how to learn? It is true that Increasingly people choose learning throughout life. I completely agree with the idea that education is more likely to be a lifelong pursuit, rather than an isolated practice in the century to come.
It is clear that, learning conditions and opportunities are increasingly improved, so, the time, location and learner constraints being transcended in the near future. Because of technological advances, people are now given learning opportunities in different places at home, at work or distance learning through online courses. People can study at any time they want, such as evenings and weekends, without being restricted to the regular school hours. It brings the initiative to learner especially busy people. With the above advantages, i believe learning can occur for everyone: the working people, parents with childcare responsibilities, the disabled, the elderly and children.
The main reasons for promoting lifelong education are to keep up the constant development of society and to satisfy our needs. Because of the acceleration of scientific and technological progress, reeducation seems to be an urgent need throughout one’s working life if they don’t want to fall behind their peers. It is certain that the knowledge learned in school is not sufficient for the job and life, which changes every day. Beside, Besides, some people learn to satisfy other desires, ranging from self-expression, individuality to fulfilment of their own dreams, non-vocational such as painting, music, history…
In conclusion, a combination of various factors, including the modern education, people's continuous learning needs, accounts for why lifelong education to be more and more popular.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 1.0 41.998997996 2% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3122.0 1615.20841683 193% => OK
No of words: 441.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.07936507937 5.12529762239 138% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.73304967333 2.80592935109 204% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56462585034 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.0 1.60771543086 62% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 209.643530785 49.4020404114 424% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 312.2 106.682146367 293% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.1 20.7667163134 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.2 7.06120827912 3% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00267499812564 0.244688304435 1% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00234246108507 0.084324248473 3% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00526870269397 0.0667982634062 8% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00131602100718 0.151304729494 1% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00322357995836 0.056905535591 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.0 13.0946893788 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.58 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 24.67 12.4159519038 199% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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