Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but other consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
There is a propensity think that commercialize tourism impact negative on culture. Otherwise, others put forwards an argument that culture can be preserved by development of the tourism.This essay will shed illumine both active and passtive effects of tourism from a cultural perspective.
On the positive side, it is clear that, tourism has significant contributions for cultural preservation. Cultural, which characteristics of each locality can known all over the world by promotional activities. Beside, when a country's cultural heritage resonated to many people, it will be protected by organizations around the world such as UNESCO. Never can protect and diffuse culture if don't have money. Tourism which is one of the most important activities bring huge sums which used for subsequently directed toward cultural protection, maintenance of key historical sites which suffered the great devastation of time.
Otherwise, cultural are gradually degenerated by the rapid development of tourism industries. Overcrowding people visiting a place will cause serious problems such as traffic jam, trash, petty theft. Food, festivals, costumes and other stimulating elements of a culture will be modified to entertain tourists. When national cultural values become a means of making money, it loses sacredness and nature.
In summary, there is a heated dispute that the development of tourism now has a great impact on current state of culture. It is clear that, tourism helps to spread and preserve the culture and it is an irrefutable fact that the negative effects of tourism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59090909091 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06843155062 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615702479339 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5339763931 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291818258443 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101274352303 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543467524849 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183652825888 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039150486343 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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