Education for young people is important in many countries. However, the others think government should spend more money for education in adult population who cannot read and write”.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
How the limited education budget of governments across the world should be allocated between the young generation and the illiterate adult group has been long known as a controversial topic. While some people consider that illiterate adults are the target group of education, I am more of the idea that education for young people should be prior to any other groups.
First and foremost, the youth’s capability of quick adaptation is the key point in many aspects of the national developing process, from economics, politics, to science and technology. In comparison to the older generations who are hardly able to adapt to a fast-changing environment due to lack of comprehensive overview, the younger citizens possess a better progressive thinking way which supports them, if being educated properly, having a better understanding in today world circumstances and being able to help the countries overcome their obstacles. Additionally, young people also have advantages over the old ones in technical application, which means the youngers can be dominated in any fields with effective help of modern technology.
The more important part is young people are the best group that can maximize the efficiency of educational invest due to their physical status. There are many pieces of research on the metabolism of the human brain have already pointed out that the more humans get older, the less productive their brains will function. It can be clearly seen as the reason why teenagers can easily focus on a task and complete that quicker than the adults, who even need help from stimulant such as caffeine to get concentrated and awake. Furthermore, at a younger stage of life, people are also less being disrupted from studying by things like family or work problems as adults may face. Therefore, if an amount of money is invested in school-age people can nurture them efficiently, that exact same amount of money will work less effectively on adults.
In conclusion, even it is widely known that both children and adults education are keys in the transformation of a country. Although adult educational development is a required mission to be tackled, the nurture of the young generation still should be the most considerable
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19337016575 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94175549615 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577348066298 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3261390738 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.666666667 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202458450307 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764476159992 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059370933871 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128951800601 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602394085101 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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