Ensuring that children should have regular physical exercises is the duty of both parents and teachers . some people believe that taking part in sports activities at school is a waste of time . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Sports are an cardinal part and parcel of our life and making them a habit brings positive changes in our life . It is expected that parents should promote sports among children at home and education institutions drop off sports from their curriculum . I totally disagree with this opinion .
Pupils spend majority of time under supervision of their mentors and they pick up sports skills comfortably under the able guidance of their teachers .To illustrate , my brother learnt yoga at school and he is a perfect yoga trainer in his profession , turning the life people from stress to motivation . Such develop cognitive skills and problem solving skills consequently students are able to confront hard situations and to make right decisions either as an individual or as a team .
Besides , sports strength their internal and external abilities and removes inferiority complex from children . For example , I used to play badminton in my school and used to examine the position of the opponent and learned striking skills quickly . That enhance my mental ability by leaps and bounce progressing very fast .
To recapitulate, a develop nation requires youngsters to build their all-round personality and only sports can indulge such qualities among the youth .
- Many sports player advertise sports related products what are the some of the advantages and disadvantages of this changing trend. 56
- Should Government spend more money in improving roads and highways or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation ? why ? Give reasons for your answers. 56
- Nowadays consumer goods have become the most popular part of people's life .what are advantages and disadvantages of this changing trend .Discuss and give opinion. 56
- People wants to own popular clothes , cars and other item .What are the reason behind this . its a positive change or negative change . 56
- While recruiting a new new employee ,the employer should pay attention to their personal qualities rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree and disagree .Give your opinion and include relevant examples. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34673366834 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77546143682 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678391959799 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.8343572911 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.222222222 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132686997359 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049498479867 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464801104487 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720235064327 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462400017346 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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