Environmental damage is the problem of most countries. What factors damage the environment and who should takes responsibility?
Environmental problems is a heated debate in this day and age considering its crucial role in our daily life. The degradation of ecology can be attributed to two main factors and it is not only individual but every single existed human being on planet should be accountable for this issue.
When it comes to the driving force behind environmental degradation, it is the population explosion and industrialization that are detrimental to our ecological system. First and foremost, increasing global population has imposed a heavy burden on food supply and land resource. It is showed in recent research that 80% of the Earth’s vegetational cover has been cleared to make room for cropland and accommodation, with a view to catch up with the increasing demand for food and housing of modern mankind. Secondly, industrialism that did not happened in accordance with protecting nature are to the detriment of the ecosystem. To be specific, chemical pollutants are discharged directly into rivers and oceans without undergoing proper filtration has pose a threat to not only aquatic habitat but also human’s domestic water source.
Hence, it is not only the responsibility of governments or gigantic corporations but also the work of each individuals considering that we all have little to enormous impacts on nature. In terms of government, more and more ecologically friendly policy should be implemented so as to preserve the country’s nature. That is to say strict legislations such as prohibit chemical waste from industrial plants, apply heavy fine on deforestation should be carried out in earnest and on a wider scale. Considering individual’s accountability in environmental conservation, by accomplishing small actions like: not dumping litters, saving energy, using bicycles or public transports instead of motorbikes or cars whenever possible, each person has made a great contribution to the protection of their surrounding nature.
In a nutshell, environmental deterioration is ascribed to the explosion of world's population and industrial processes. The responsibility of conserving our surroundings should not be put down to any independent organizations but to every citizens, governments and corporations on Earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, as to, in fact, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5701754386 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42642278568 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608187134503 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7638104563 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.538461538 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972119065713 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333511269642 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269641529992 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638766521396 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299543662733 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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