Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What are the major causes?
of environmental damage? Who is responsible for preventing environmental damage?
Damage to the natural environment is a serious issue over the world. This essay will look at some primary causes and offer some solutions that can be taken to mitigate these potential problems.
There are a number of reasons that lead to environmental damage. The first reason is an increase in the production of consumer goods. The mass production of disposable goods and chemical by-products causes more toxic waste and emissions released from factories into nature. As a result, water, air, and soil are polluted which leads to the deaths of many plants and animals over the world. Besides that, the population of many countries is growing rapidly. Housing problems are put into emergency resulting in demolishing woodland for accommodation. The more houses are built, the more woodland is destroyed to meet people’s demands. Furthermore, the expansion of hunting and trading rare flora and fauna causes a decrease in biological diversity due to species extinction.
From my perspective, both the government and individuals are responsible for the problems mentioned above. There are several actions that can be taken to mitigate them. Firstly, an official law, which stipulates heavy penalties for those who destroy the environment, has to be applied. In Singapore, for instance, any people who throw waste on the street must pay a fine of 1000 Singapore dollars for the first time and this money increases if they commit again. Another solution is (2) the government should encourage manufacturers to use alternative materials and resources to fossil fuels that are eco-friendlier such as solar resources. This helps to reduce pollutant emissions released into the environment. Finally, individuals raise self-awareness and self-consciousness and join hands to prevent environmental damage.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to the development of environmental damage and measures can be implemented by the government and individuals to reduce these problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51960784314 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11128274366 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601307189542 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6497006979 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247810900509 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641765179988 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589804132211 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134455371416 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507574338521 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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