Essay about overpopulation in cities Have to talk about the problems of overpopulation and suggest some solutions to this problem

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Essay about overpopulation in cities. Have to talk about the problems of overpopulation and suggest some solutions to this problem.

With increasing trend of modernization in the different economies it has lead to various serious issues, one amongst them is overpopulation. Issue of overpopulation further come along with other hazardous impacts like, traffic problems, pollution, diminishing green belt which poses threat to the other living beings.

Issue of rising population is the major issue which has raised alarm for nations around the world. As it is like a atom bomb which will prove to be heinous. Overpopulation in the major cities of world has given rise to other issues such as increasing crime rate, descending air quality index and also with the migrations from other areas has given rise to establish of slum areas which represents negative image of society and also residing there leads to epidemic and harmful diseases. Hence, it imposes challenges and additional burden on Government health machinery.

Solution to this alarming situation can be from both sides i.e. Government and individuals. Governments should run awareness campaigns to teach illiterates about the aspects of family planning and its benefits for society. Moreover, the Government should also run advertisements through different platforms like digital media or paper media to give a strong message. Also, being responsible citizens of nation it is duty of nationals to follow Government guidelines.

In conclusion problem of overpopulation in urban area is serious issue. It can be tackled by joint efforts of both the people and Government bodies only then appropriate and effective results can be achieved in order to make the world a better place to live.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sed alarm for nations around the world. As it is like a atom bomb which will prove...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nations around the world. As it is like a atom bomb which will prove to be heinou...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37647058824 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93212725546 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4716254957 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0988330026661 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370187411401 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581460767427 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548948408824 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205948882819 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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