Essay topics: Consumers are faced with increasing number of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
It is such a phenomenal ripe for the advertisements that we seen on a daily basis. Not only through the traditional publicists such as televison or newspapers, apps for social networking are the most abundant channels that we receive commercial nowadays. Due to the intensified competitions, entrepreneurs tend to overreacting when it comes to promote the merchandise in order to increase their profits.
Urge of purchasing is buried deeply in our subconsciousness along with the satisfaction we enjoyed, this certainly brings us gratification. Commercial slogans are normally useful and effective for us to catch a glimpse of the commodity, but there is a distinguish between the ads we receiver and encounter. Back in the days, consumers rarely saw any leaflets outside the supermarkets. With the prosperity of the economy and technology, advertisements become harder to refuse. One cannot watching a movie or video online before seeing several ads promoted by the platform and the network opreaters. Social platforms such as Facebook and others are preserving their monopoly by spreading customized ads in order to increase their profits. Consumerism are definitely one of the unhealthy consequence this ads crazy burgeoning brings. people with poor judgment and rationality are dividing large amounts of money to joint this fanatical activity.
It is crucial to put actions into solving this problem, such as screening the advertisements with higer standers to check for false advertising or cutting the hourly percentage of ads we unwilling encountered with. Creating a measuring system for customer to give opinions about the promotion they recieve is also a great way to leaning on the unwelcome ads.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43609022556 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21913410005 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635338345865 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4250596239 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100279326639 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354823940875 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037245053656 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697898324202 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023876456148 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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