Nowadays, overpopulation has become the biggest problems for human beings as the population is growing in astounding ways. I am totally in favour of a steady rise in the earth's population being the enormous issues for people. This essay will discuss the most common aetiologies with relevant examples.
Firstly, decline in the death rates and rise in the birth rates can be one of the significant fundamental reasons. Owing to the advancements and new inventions in medicine, previously fatal and dreadful diseases have found the successful treatments. In absence of remarkable discoveries, the majority of patients would have died untimely. More uncoverings likewise have made just possible for couple who are unable to undergo fertility treatment methods and have their own babies, leading to rise in the birth rates.
Secondly, migration plays a major role for the surge in the population because many people prefer moving to developed nations such as the United States and the United Kingdom, where the best facilities are available in terms of education, employment, medical and security. Unfortunately, the marked proportions of people tend to settle permanently and the places often become overcrowded. To add to this, the rate of emigration does not match the percentage of immigration, eventually making a way to overpopulation. Last but not least, lack of education forms a solid basis for overpopulation. Take the example of developing countries where most citizens are illiterate, live below the poverty level and have little or no knowledge about the family planning. Further, children get married at an early age, increasing the perfect possibilities of producing more kids since they are unable to understand the harmful consequences of overpopulation and therefore bound to avoid family planning measures.
Presumably, the world's population growth remains one of the biggest headaches since the projected 8 billion to 10 billion human populations cannot live on the earth without depleting the natural resources. In order to sustain a quality of life, the majority of occupants are bound to bring widespread destructions of planet's ecosystem, giving off greenhouse gases, which constitute the major contributors of global warming. According to the Global Footprint Network, an alliance of scientists has reached a conclusion that most nations are running in ecological deficits by consuming faster than replenishing the bio capacity that supports the production of crops and other goods.
In conclusion, it is clear that the sustained increase in the population poses great threats to humanity due to large scale immigration, illiteracy and scientific discoveries.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Overpopulation is not equal to 'continued rise in the world’s population'.
Overpopulation occurs when a species' population exceeds the carrying capacity of its ecological niche. It can result from an increase in births (fertility rate), a decline in the mortality rate, an increase in immigration, or an unsustainable biome and depletion of resources.
migration or emigration will not increase the total population, but may make one area Overpopulated. So this is a wrong reason:
migration plays a major role for the surge in the population because many people prefer moving to developed nations such as the United States and the United Kingdom, where the best facilities are available in terms of education, employment, medical and security. Unfortunately, the marked proportions of people tend to settle permanently and the places often become overcrowded. To add to this, the rate of emigration does not match the percentage of immigration, eventually making a way to overpopulation.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 412 350
No. of Characters: 2228 1500
No. of Different Words: 260 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.505 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.408 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.98 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 172 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 140 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 103 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 75 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.235 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.252 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.353 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.277 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.539 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.026 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...tally in favour of a steady rise in the earths population being the enormous issues fo...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...y planning measures. Presumably, the worlds population growth remains one of the bi...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2281.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53640776699 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07944862232 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638349514563 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 726.3 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2440802873 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.176470588 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2352941176 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11357987212 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326795551079 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386728034522 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662298833686 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457995926084 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 78.4519038076 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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