Essay topics: The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
Nowadays, overpopulation has become the biggest problems for human beings as the population is growing in astounding ways. I am totally in favour of a steady rise in the earth's population being the enormous issues for people. This essay will discuss the most common aetiologies with relevant
examples.
Firstly, decline in the death rates and rise in the birth rates can be one of the significant fundamental reasons. Owing to the advancements and new inventions in medicine, previously fatal and dreadful diseases have found the successful treatments. In absence of remarkable discoveries, the majority of patients would have died untimely. More uncoverings likewise have made just possible for couple who are unable to undergo fertility treatment methods and have their own babies, leading to rise in the birth rates.
Secondly, migration plays a major role for the surge in the population because many people prefer moving to developed nations such as the United States and the United Kingdom, where the best facilities are available in terms of education, employment, medical and security. Unfortunately, the marked proportions of people tend to settle permanently and the places often become overcrowded. To add to this, the rate of emigration does not match the percentage of immigration, eventually making a way to overpopulation.
Last but not least, lack of education forms a solid basis for overpopulation. Take the example of developing countries where most citizens are illiterate, live below the poverty level and have little or no knowledge about the family planning. Further, children get married at an early age, increasing the perfect possibilities of producing more kids since they are unable to understand the harmful consequences of overpopulation and therefore bound to avoid family planning measures. In addition, the majority of cases consider the overpopulation as an increase in the Human Resources as in the number of productive hands, an negative trait, responsible for the flare up of population.
In conclusion, it is clear that the sustained increase in the population is due to large scale immigration, illiteracy and scientific discoveries.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
There are two questions:
1. What are the causes of this continued rise?
2. Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
All reasons given are for the question 1. There is no content for the question 2.
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We can use one or two paragraphs for question 1, while one paragraph for question 2.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 338 350
No. of Characters: 1796 1500
No. of Different Words: 211 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.288 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.314 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.024 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 133 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 58 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.533 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.755 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.301 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.579 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.04 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...tally in favour of a steady rise in the earths population being the enormous issues fo...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 624, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s as in the number of productive hands, an negative trait, responsible for the fla...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47041420118 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14077048992 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633136094675 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9567293143 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.266666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0987540189998 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307630105005 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356276496793 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0537751722257 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051293991365 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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