Essay topics: Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?
In this modern era despite technological advancement, many students have to leave their home and have to go to other cities for pursuing higher education in different alma mater. There are both benefits and drawbacks of this development which will be discussed further in different paragraphs.
As far as the positive outcomes are concerned, one of which is that when pupils leave their home for educational purposes, they might gain a sense of independence and freedom such as they spend pocket -money in different leisure activity freely. By living in the hostel, they are able to make friends with different people and by socializing with different people, they might gain deep insight at life and things as well. They will have a broad vision if they master the art of communication. Therefore, life apart from home is necessary for the intellectual development of students if they want to excel in different fields of life.
On the other hand, some drawbacks which affect students badly, when they leave their home, is loneliness. Out of home, far away from parents, in a different city with a different type of people, they might feel a bit of disparity and sorrow. Along with this, another factor is that those who live outside the home might have great expenditures, so that they have to spend a great amount of money in order to fulfil their needs. For example, when a pupil goes to London from Nepal, he should have a great reserve of money in order to enjoy a healthy lifestyle otherwise, things become worse with the passage of time. Hence, it is also cleared that life out of home is not easy as well.
In conclusion, living inside or outside hometown, there are both merits and demerits of that development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84797297297 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62010395957 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530405405405 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9102560067 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221331204133 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876456038608 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459538094971 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14057764827 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326895220009 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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