many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. what are the advantages and disadvantages of both situation?
A lot of university students inhabit with their parent's home by contrast another group has to live in other cities far from their families. Accordingly a couple of merits and demerits will be explored in this essay.
A couple of universities students who live with their families will not gain terrific experience about being independent in life. To illustrate, should young individuals inhabit with their families, they will rely on their families defend. There fore they will not take a chance to be financially independent because their families endorse them all time. Additionally, social experts argue that pupils who live their families not only will not encounter challenges but will not tackle social life as well.
More over, pupils should assert their capabilities with getting high score in exams. To be more specific, it is critical for them to pay meticulous attention to study. In addition, if only universities students did not live with their families because family gatherings can be destructive for their studies. Consequently, living with family has immense impact on pupils productivity.
A part from that housing is not affordable for all individuals specifically for young university students. That is to say, a couple of students are not financially independent or their jobs does not pay well. Furthermore, most of the dormitories does not have adequate amenities for students such as rooms for studying. Thus, students have no choice but to live with their parents because family provide them well suited amenities.
In summary, lots of university students live with their families but other chose another city for studying. To me, I would rather student s gain experience about a potent life for this reason they should become independent from their families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, as to, in addition, in summary, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34736842105 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80839001535 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515789473684 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8664601546 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.25 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355997688317 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143336680636 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113197712129 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248336166875 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494008647487 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.