Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In recent years, working in the same company is preferred by some people, whereas others believe that it is good to work in different companies throughout their life and according to my view, change of environment is necessary for better working output.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why people like to work in the same organization. The first one is that most people become habitual of their daily routine and they do not want to change their routine by changing locations for their work. For example, most people living in small cities prefer this habit. Another reason is that their chances of getting success are increased by remaining in the same company. For instance, an officer in a factory gets a promotion at ease due to his long experience in it. Thus, it is cleared that many people want to remain in the same place.
On the other hand, I believe that changing the working environment is good because it gives you an opportunity to explore different horizons. This activity is good for merchants who trade in different cities and sell their products such as hand-woven clothes and other similar items. By this, they generate huge revenue. If not doing this process, they might suffer huge losses in business. Furthermore, for getting a better skill it is beneficial to work in different sectors. Most of the people who earn their living through different NGOs have the calibre to excel in different fields as seen in developed countries. Hence, it is advantageous to keep rotating in different organizations.
In conclusion, while some individuals like to work in one company apart from many others. In my opinion, it is essential to do work in different companies to renew your experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, whereas, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92096219931 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67018048865 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529209621993 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6795591139 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440657320685 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132266296075 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100756676198 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278084640852 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704765477897 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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