Essay topics In some countries schools are open till late so that children can be looked after when parents are at work Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

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Essay topics:
In some countries, schools are open till late so that children can be looked after when parents are at work. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Parent working full-time job usually find it difficult to take care of their children after school. Schools in some countries decided to come against this problem. Advantages and disadvantages can be found in this occurrence.

First, full-time workers don’t need to worry about finding a babysitter. Parents want to make sure that their children will be in good hands and don’t want to be stress about their kid’s safety. Moreover, when pupils stay late at school they can receive help from teachers from the school …

On the other hand, some kids might feel tired after a whole day at school, but they won’t be able to rest since their parents still working. Some … is more comfortable and safer in the parents’s siblings, company or at least in their own house. This could lead to seeing barriers between other people and themselves.

The possibility of leaving youth at culty longer maybe very helpful to some parents. However, it is important to work out system and schedule so their kids know when they will be spending more time at school. Moms and dads need to keep in minds their children needs and views on the situation.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, at least, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89795918367 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39056611092 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647959183673 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0518363023 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2727272727 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325949654836 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112962530813 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780021435616 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201697460579 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057883484395 0.056905535591 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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