Establishing good relationships in the workplace is not important, as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
A workplace is a mixture of people of different sexes, cultures and backgrounds. It is often argued that maintaining a healthy bond with colleagues is not necessary because the main aim of every individual is to concentrate on work. I completely do not opine with this statement as I think, the overall development of a company depends on the work culture.
Firstly, it is not a single person who can do wonders. In order to take a business forward, the whole team needs to put their fullest efforts into the work. So, a healthy relationship is needed to help each other in times of need. For example, many top Multi-national companies will take their teams to corporate lunches, outings once in a month to develop the rapport within the group. However, while many others support the statement of individual focus, I incline towards the view of collaboration in the work.
Moreover, the feeling of loneliness does not contribute much to the success of the person himself and the company. A workplace consists of people of different ages and everyone needs mentoring in different stages when working together. So, the feeling of moving together is essential in teamwork rather than focusing alone. For instance, every employee wants to work in a place where there is no bossism and the feeling of oneness exists.
Though the argument that says our main motive is to indulge in work individually seems plausible, with scrutiny I feel that better bonding between the teams creates wonders and reduce the feeling of loneliness and helps in getting mentored when needed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00763358779 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82433463846 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1119911922 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189635950944 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068768314235 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441534907692 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109507875698 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550957261194 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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