We have different modes of transportation around the world where air travel is extensively used for the commute between the two countries. It is quite a common discussion that happens amongst people that the development of air travel has benefits to only certain demographics of society and is of no use for the rest. This essay will argue both the ideas and will incline towards the view that most of them are getting an advantage with the increase in the development of air travel.
Undoubtedly, the government is trying to install airports in all the major cities. This is increasing the frequency of the flights, thus giving an advantage for the citizens to travel faster. For instance, it is taking less than 24 hours these days to travel across the continents with minimum layoffs. Secondly, the prices are also coming down with maximum usage. Jets utilized for domestic travels became very affordable these days.
Despite the above advantages, there is an argument that not everyone is utilizing the air travel for the commute. Their view is that people who come from the village background might not be well versed with technology to book online. They might not be updated with ongoing discounts over the websites. Secondly, they claim that the prices are not affordable to the lower middle-class set of people. For example, people can travel couple of days on a train to reach far off places rather than spending a lot of bucks over the flights.
To recapitulate, the statement that the travel using the aero mode is not beneficial to the majority seems plausible, with a close scrutiny this seems to be wrong. The overall development of air travel will definitely be a positive to most of the people in terms of money and saving the time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...here air travel is extensively used for the commute between the two countries. It is quite ...
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...veryone is utilizing the air travel for the commute. Their view is that people who come fro...
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Suggestion: scrutiny
...to the majority seems plausible, with a close scrutiny this seems to be wrong. The overall dev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88628762542 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61734267088 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3172290344 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323460989903 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973472876848 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741414500976 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192916738712 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776011410308 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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