There is no doubt that the government allocated huge funds to traffic roads while certain people argue that they should spend it to build new railways. I completely agree with this statement by virtue of railroads that may contribute to the advancement of commodity circulation.
To begin with, in the last few decades we see a plethora of opportunities for building railroads due to its lead to enhancement turnover between cities. Therefore, I strongly claim that railroads play an essential role in the country economic. To illustrate, in China policy starts construction of one of the longest railroads through Central Asia which impacts for co-operation with European countries and this project took the name "New Silk Road". Further local researchers convinced that it will help for local businesses to become more competitive with developed countries.
Secondly, railways can be used in any season as well as other transport cannot afford it and that's why building railroads a huge more beneficial. Likewise, by railway, inhabitants can reach to their destination despite the distance or weather. For instance, Kazakhstan a tremendous country situated in the middle of Asia where the north side has quite cold weather and a lot of transport roads will be covered snow. For this situation, the optimal transport is the train which can cope with it regardless of undesirable conditions.
To conclude, building roads is a good way for the interaction of society such as between distant places. But from my point of view building railroads a bit more beneficial than traffic roads
- Climate change is now an accepted threat to our planet but there is not enough political action to control excessive consumerism and pollution Do you agree 78
- The chart below, shows the amount of money per spent on fast foods in britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent. 73
- The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010. 67
- Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The bar chart below shows the number of students in three different courses from 2001-2004. Identify the main trends and summarize the data 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...as other transport cannot afford it and thats why building railroads a huge more bene...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26274509804 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93885921788 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650980392157 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3282679955 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162186505187 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573800785753 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441230312462 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105226195043 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615295530084 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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