Every culture, throughout time, has recorded it history in one way or another.
In what ways can history be passed on to the next generation?
One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that history was recorded by all cultures from early times, and it was done in different was. History should be saved in our computers and in the internet for centuries, as people should know about the past times as it can help to predict the future and save humankind.
Firstly, it must be admitted that history is the most important source of knowledge and history should be saved on the hard drivers and in the internet. This is because the internet and hard drivers are the most reliable ways to save information for centuries. One of the main reasons behind that is that simple computer with 100 GB memory can save million books, photographs and articles. Furthermore, all information about history can be copied million times in to different computers, servers and hard drivers and saved around the world as this devices are very small and can be saved in one locked room.
People from early times were interested in the history as it helped them to understand many issues and answer to the most interest questions. In other words, it would be impossible to understand how people lived thousands ears ago without books which archeologists found in the ancient places. Another point to consider is that history helps us to predict the future and prevent many dire consequences from nature catastrophes. Take for example South-east Asia countries, they created the most efficient alarm system from typhoons and hurricanes after the most terrible typhoon in 2009 which took away more than 300 000 lives.
In conclusion, people should save information about history in our state-of-the-art technologies for future generation as it will help them to develop and prevent catastrophes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...information about history can be copied million times in to different computers, server...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05226480836 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70940372234 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526132404181 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.868690174 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.818181818 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217501645764 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857336739585 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525939038648 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128857754429 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578025591753 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.