The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa.
The line graph illustrates changes in the average monthly temperature and bar chart shows the average monthly rainfall throughout the year in one East Africa region.
Overall, it can be seen that fall and spring are the most hottest seasons with the highest amount of precipitation around the year.
In January, average monthly temperature and millimeters of precipitation are stood at about 19.0 and 200 respectively. Then the average temperature increases gradually to reach a high of about 24 in March while the average monthly rainfall rises exponentially from 10 to 280 between February and April. From April to July the temperature declines steadily to 20.5 and monthly precipitation go down sharply to 5 millimeters.
Between July and November the temperature growth steadily to 23.5 following by a steady decline to 21.5 in December. The average rainfall days increase sharply from 25 to 150 between September and November, then the average amount of precipitation go down to 50 in December.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'hottest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: hottest
...an be seen that fall and spring are the most hottest seasons with the highest amount of prec...
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Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the hottest'.
Suggestion: most the hottest
...an be seen that fall and spring are the most hottest seasons with the highest amount of prec...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 160.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28125 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02122052116 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7551272776 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.714285714 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359319127076 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168101758201 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.208467836048 0.0667982634062 312% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237950385017 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.254927856523 0.056905535591 448% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.