Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, health problem is clearly something that is often discussed in today's world that's why, vegetarianism is become more and more popular for many people becuase meat can harmful to the body. However, I strongly believe that it is not neccessary for people to be vegetertian.
To embark on, there are several reasons for eating meat. First and foremost, some people can not eat vegetable in their whole life so that, they face difficulty to accept this. For the real-life example, some contries such as africa and china and many more those countries people never seen the vegitable becuase this countries do not have appropriate land to fertilise. In addition to this, when people change habbitant like eating meat to become vegitarian they can takle numberious problem therefore, it is benificial to maintaine their food which eaten by them in routine life. What is more, the vegitable producers can not capable to distribute it in every nook and cranny of the world. if everyone take the vegitable to eat, people will face starving problem in future life.
On the contrast side, it is important to note down why vegitable is helpfull for good health. To begin with, there are many research suggest that read meat is perticularly bad, for illustrate, consumption should be limited to eating it just a few times a week to avoid such things as a cancer. Meats can also be high in sugar so they have been linked to life-long health problems such as diabetes.
In conclusion, I reiterate my opinion and saying that people should not change their meal but it is cruicial to maintain their diet, it important for fitness and healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90681003584 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5560556901 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6613921409 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192173969791 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748999751386 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461711881496 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108762007628 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494555439771 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.