Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Whether to become a vegetarian of not, it is highly controversial topic over the years. Many believe that it is an excellent way to avoid severe health disorders. However, this essay will shed light on why being a non-vegetarian is paradoxically beneficial.
To begin with, the primary argument in favor of having meat is that it contains a high amount of nutrition such as fiber, protein and calcium are extremely essential to keep one energetic throughout the day. Moreover, to some professionals, such as sports-persons, a non-vegetarian diet is highly recommended. This can be well explained by the recent example of one Indian wrestler, Geeta Phogat who had to start eating chicken to acquire enough stamina for wrestling. Therefore, it has been seen that being a non-vegetarian helps one to remain physically strong.
In addition, eating meat increases one's immunity. For instance, meat eaters have a high physical resilience to sustain themselves in an extremely cold or hot weather; as a result, they could not easily catch common sickness, such as cold and high fever. According to one statistics undertaken in 'Appolo' hospital in India, it has been shown that 65% patients who had been suffering from such illnesses were the one's who tended to follow vegetarian diet. Thus, it goes without saying that consumption of non-vegetarian food can lend to improved health.
To recapitulate, this essay has illustrated that a non-vegetarian diet has an extreme potential to raise one's physical strength as well as one's ability to fight against normal sicknesses. By considering these health benefits, it can be predicted that more people will start having a non-vegetarian diet in the foreseeable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25912408759 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13811953806 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605839416058 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.85371125 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121980432932 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528977254877 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321542503438 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820227209878 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108397825148 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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